Boni_Bee

wow, that was beautiful!!! sad..... :( The only thing I'll nit-pick is that the second stanza didn't ryme as well as the others. But apart from that, I thought it ...

wow!!!! Good job!!! At first I thought there was going to be the Prince Charming rescue thing, but no, it turned around!!! :shock: :D Very good

"27B...27B...." Norman muttered to himself looking from his boarding pass to the seats upholstered alternately in orange, purple, and other shades of tacky. Tacky what? Ding The safety announcement be

He sang all night, no matter what! Darkness and its black gala mantle, Was tightening it grip, Knotting and trying to suffocate us. His subtle fingers could not stand the ...

As i lay awake at night, I think about the day that just went by, Wondering if I could have changed anything to make it better. - you need another ...

Hearts breaking Friends leaving Tears falling Like petals from a flower - nice description. This was my fave stanza of the whole thing, and you could have made a nice ...

In her room Kyla glanced at the silk dress her maid had lain her out and sighed. It was her mothers dress and she was sure her father had intentionally ...

Teppei shook in his sleep, sweat covered his face. He was dreaming again, another one of those twisted ones he had become so accustomed to having. It started in a ...

here I am standing at your doorstep waiting for you wishing that the rose in my hand hadn’t died pedal by pedal Uh...I think you mean 'petal by petal' each ...

She was headed to a small cottage, at the end of town. It had a small vegetable garden in the back, and a flower pot hung in the window. When ...

In the air, Between the trees, You can feel The cool morning breeze. Very nice Up in the trees, A bird if born. Off the trail, A wolf mourns. I ...

The clatter of a body falling down stairs, Then ringing silence fills the air. He hadn’t meant to push her down. Now all he can do is stand and drown ...

When I first read this, I didn't get what you were saying on the second line of each stanza (the opposite to the first line). Nice poem, but some of ...

Its usual occupant was on the way, fighting their way through the night, as it was a rather windy evening. I think you mean 'fighting his way through the night'. ...

ditto^ I'd like to see the next bit :) There could be a bit more description and emotion in it though...I didn't really get an idea of the countryside/castle...