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Re: Where Lost Deams Go to Die
Not bad, not my favorite, but not bad. Tranquility reigns hold and I let the air around me be the only sound The part in blue I don't really get, ...
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Re: Welcome to Hell
Woo Jas I actually really enjoyed this, the rhyme I didn't mind at all and the concept I found really interesting. I don't know if I would have understood that ...
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Re: Untitled right now. Needs help :) Short though.
Ohai der Your discovery is interrupted by a click and opening of door embedded into the wall. A nurse walks in holding a syringe The nurse stabs the needle clear ...
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Re: Haiku
Well there's not much I can say about a haiku, so I'll just tell you what I think about it. A lot of your poetry is about love, and lies ...
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Re: ThinPrettySmartStrong --- Lost
Jaaaaas I don't want to do this no more Dx But I will because I want to get my next star. The starved body begs that she wouldn't, Shove the ...
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Re: The Sound of Goodbye
Oooooh I like cake, and reeeeviews, but I like cake better...There had better be cake at my Hope is epic awesome day >.> Her steady breathing, She walks into the ...
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Re: Peaceful, At Last
You know I really hope no one else besides you is reading these reviews I'm giving you cause I sounds really mean, or just insane at times. xD I breathe ...
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Re: I am Jane Doe
I'm actually in French class right now so if this review sucks don't blame me. Blame the French. That girl whose name you can't quite place the one whose hand ...
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Re: beginging
Hey there! I'm Hope and I'll be reviewing you this fine morning! =D First thing is your title, I'm guessing you meant it to be "Beginning"? Just hit the nifty ...
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Re: After Class
Almost 3am and on a roll, so I'm noooot sleeping!! Poison kisses that taste so sweet Pull up his shirt Bolt the door Slide down my skirt Hope don't like ...
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Re: Dust and Shadows
Finally something I don't feel bad about reviewing! Her beauty is of plastic flowers, Shining and bright, but only as real as one wills it to be I like this ...
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Re: 2.13.10-Nursing Homes and Dream Boys~2.14.10-Valentines Blah
Hai. I'm going to review and I just realized its like 2am sooo, you're welcome ;). GET UP YOU BRAT!! YOU HAVE WRITING PROJECT!! The slightly scary thing is that ...
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Re: 2.12.10-Valentines Day and Sucky Things
Bleh, this is like a year old but whatever. Apparently I have a secret admirer. I was kinda thrilled inside to get the roses though, like my thought frame was ...
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Re: .
To Jas: I don't want to review this. But I would really like it if I didn't have to review this. I'm already tired of you. Because I am He ...
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Re: Confessions of a pissed off teen on suicide watch *Edit!!*
So I was all like "Huh, this sounds really familiar," as I was reading it and then as I kept reading I finally realized that I *did* review it the ...
Feb 3, 2011
