BlueSunset

Hello, here to review! Ok, wow, this is off to a great start. I found no errors- of course, since you're a great writer. I also wanted to say this ...

What can I say? Wonderful! The words simply drifted off the page and the ending was great! As far as I can see, there are no negative parts to this ...

I totally agree, blind probably does suck. Just reading this chapter made me think and picture how it would be to be blind. This one chapter, I think, is totally ...

This is great! I love to read and write poems, and this one is great. The only thing I saw was the font....... It kept changing. I'm not sure if ...

It's nice, though you could add a bit more information the readers need to know. So far we get that Ira is a girl, but how old? Could you have ...

So it's a mix of a poem and letter? Anyways, I think it's neat. I have to say it was pretty long.. But I like it. The topic is a ...

When I read this, I'm like, how can someone state the definition of sense? I mean really, that's impressive. The length is nice and long, and it was descriptive. I ...

Wow! That's really impressive to make a long poem about one subject: fire. This poem made me feel something. If you make another one, I will want to read it. ...

It's sort of reminded me of a dictionary, but in more humor, and a bit more interesting to read. I think my favorite part was uppercase, because it kept getting ...

I think this was a little cute..... I found the word "of" capitalized in the middle of a part, and I'm not sure if it was purposefully or not, but ...

I really enjoy how much informations of life into your poem, in not too much space. I found now spelling errors; or at least when I read it. Normally I ...

It's nice rhyming, and I like that when you said a type of little animal, they would have something little, too. The thing I like most is the pigs- wearing ...

The poem rhymes perfectly, and you made no spelling errors, or at least not that I know of. The title really explains what the poem's about, and the topic is ...

It is AWESOME! I really like how every single line rhymes, and how some parts repeat. It's just so BEAUTIFUL!!!! After I review this awesome poem, I'm totally going to ...

Really nice, quick poem. Most people think poems should be long or should rhyme, but poems are actually fine like this one. I have to say, though, that I couldn't ...