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Absolutly amazing! I honestly mean it when I say this is the best piece of work I have read on this site! You had me glued from the beginning and ...

Wow! This is great :) and you say it is your first poem so that makes me even more impressed! You ability to compose with rythme is shown and certainly ...

Very good! You should be proud of your work :) I'm not an expert with this so I don't really have any worthwhile advice- just know that I definitly enjoyed ...

HI! Nice poem you have here :) The last two lines I found particularly gripping- very clever! The rythme was good and it is clear that you have your own ...

Hi! Great poem! I particularly admired your vocabulary which you used wisely, adding emphasis to your most defining lines, supported with a bit of light and shade in you sentence ...

Hey! Love the poem! Is a great idea and was sad in a sort of breath-taking way. My advice- you should find an alternative word for 'world'- it kind of ...

HEY! This is a good poem- I like the concept! 'Goodbye to Goodbyes'... certainly a thought-provoking title. One thing I would like to advice you on is to not use ...

The ideas behind your storyline is interesting but your communication of it is a bit to casual. You need to either phrase everything in a poetic form or have it ...

I really, really like this poem. It is bitter and full of emotion which is what I love the most. My main concern is the length; it gets to the ...

This poem is certainly very sweet :) And I liked the nice little message to your friends at the end. My only concern is the cliche` side of things. There ...

Wow. I really like this poem! I love the way you have shown all the different points of 'break' in a relatioship, both the good and the bad. You used ...

This poem is beautiful. You have chosen a wonderful part of nature to describe and have definitly done it justice. You tied it up nicely at the end. I also ...

WOW! This is an amazing poem (seriously, take this as a huge compliment; I don't usually rave about poems like this). You have such a deep insight to a wonderful ...

Hi! Your poem was good but I do agree with the points that the previous review made that it got a bit repetitive and the dashes were annoying which meant ...

Wow; definitly an odd concept but I can see the metaphoric message between the lines. Its is a good poem as it is written simply to communicate an idea that ...