Published October 10, 2010
"I promise I won't ever break you."
Kissing at lunch break.
Open up to break down all secrets.
Making love, don't wanna stop to take a break.
Break our eye contact to look at that girl.
Break the bad news to me, about the cheating.
You seemed to break your promise so easy.
"I think we should take a break."
Break turns to forever.
Heart ache, heart break.
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Wow. I really like this poem! I love the way you have shown all the different points of 'break' in a relatioship, both the good and the bad. You used the quotes cleverly to show how the person talked the talk but didn't walk the walk. Once again, well done and best wishes for future poetry
-Blossom xx