BlondeTwiggy

This is too funny. Hmm, I wonder if you will ask that friend for writing ideas again :D It sounds so serious and somber until the last line, like a ...

No, I like it short. The shorter the poem is, the better, in my opinion. Leaves us wondering...and leaves it open for interpretation. Sometimes it's better not to spell everything ...

Um, I think the point of reviewing is to give constructive feedback, not insulting and rude feedback. :]] Your poem is seriously not that bad, bisquit. I think trees are ...

Wow, that's a little...pessimistic. :]] I also go through the same feelings (don't we all?) that my poetry must be halfway decent, then I read one of the great poets ...

Oh, I love this. I think sonnets must be hard to write, at least for me, but yours is very descriptive. I think there is a spelling error (colied? Coiled, ...

Haha, I like this. So it took him all day to answer? Wow. And the ending, that was really unexpected (another thing I love in poetry). She didn't marry him ...

Blank verse is unrhymed iambic pentameter, unless the definition has changed without my knowing it. :]] I think a better description for "Away" would be free verse. Inspiration can come ...

Interesting...I'm trying to figure this out metaphorically. Does the golden bird stand for someone or something? An authority figure, perhaps, someone abusive? And why does he wish for a dance? ...

Wow, I have to comment on this :] It was intense, almost made me cry, really, you have worded it so well. The meter is off in some stanzas, but ...

I like this. Kind of saw the ending coming, but I like it. :]] The beginning is interesting and makes one want to read more. The story isn't focused on ...

Wow, I really enjoyed this, Gahks. An original idea, made me think, I love poems that do that. We were once strangers, souls set on a collision course in the ...

I like this. Cute and at the end, thought-provoking. Also not cliche like smorgishborg said. She reads A. A. Milne upside down, dad’s glasses on her nose, then will recite ...

Haha, surprise ending! I love those. Fun, cute piece, not a lot of substance, but I like it. The southern "touch" makes it a little unique. :] The ending was ...

Hi, RedWing, newbie here, so hope I do ok. Overall impressions: I can really feel your frustration in this poem - a good sign. I think we all know the ...

Hi Eimear, this is my first review (I think?), so bear with me. :] I like this idea: cute, child-like, pretty original, easy to understand. Although your lack of meter ...