Blift

I feel like dying too. :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( ...

Leave fishface alone!!!!!! It's too short.

Sorry, but you just failed. Sorry, but you just failed. Sorry, but you just failed. Sorry, but you just failed. Sorry, but you just failed. Sorry, but you just failed. ...

It's funny because of the rhyming scheme. you missed out one of the 99,100s. "Be a hen?" What does that mean. "more sheen"? Huh?

I love this poem by you. it starts off pretty bland but rhythmic, the lo-o-og song is great. But why is short spelt shórt? a (fat) bat, is Ok. But ...

@Crysi, *Kicks* This topic isn't locked.!!! I liked this, it's an effective message to get people to read your poems. I like it. It's also funny

It's OK, but i'm not sure too many people will understand what you're trying to say, although I do agree with some of the other reviews, which is why i'm ...

I really like this poem .i hope you come back to YWS because you're poems were extremely underrated. Well, bye my friend, I don't expect you to come back anytime ...

Please please please continue this i want to know what happens next, and if he ever meets Alice again.

I hope this is a metaphor rather than a literal room. I'm thinking that this room is actually life. I saw the title "Depression" and that's what i'm going through ...

I think she was Evil, because you never know that there are three sides to a story, the good, the bad and the ugly. They only showed the good and ...

Well I think it was really boring, it's not very enticing but then again that's what i would expect for someone who wanted to write a fan fiction of Harry ...

Yes I agree, the dashes do p me off The context of this piece of art kinda reminds of Madonna's She's Not me Overall, it sounds just like a cliché ...

I think the title shouild be capitalised: Superstar Thiese lyrics sound too much like any original lyrics, someone who is ignored and fantasises about someone else, wishing they could be ...