Published June 4, 2010
Superstar
Oh boy it’s you I see now
I wish you could see me
You don’t know me but I know you
If only we could meet
You travel with you band
And you play it cool
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But we will never be together
With all those millions wanting you
I wish I could stand a chance
But just too far
Superstar
I go to all you concerts
And I try to make it though
But there’s no point in that no more
Cos you going global
You are so gorgeous to me
And I will always love you
chorus
But we will never be together
With all those millions wanting you
I wish I could stand a chance
But just too far
Superstar
I try to contact you
But you never reply
I understand if you busy
But not all the time
I copy you fashion line
I have your posters too
chorus
But we will never be together
With all those millions wanting you
I wish I could stand a chance
But just too far
Superstar
You sing aloud
And I scream you name
If only you could hear me
Oh that would be nice (that would be nice)
If you could look me in the eyes
chorus
But we will never be together
With all those millions wanting you
I wish I could stand a chance you boy
But just too far
Superstar
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I think the title shouild be capitalised: Superstar
Thiese lyrics sound too much like any original lyrics, someone who is ignored and fantasises about someone else, wishing they could be together. Try something else except these teenage infatuations.
Hi mistymoo! I thought this reminded me way to much of Lady Gaga or Jay Sean. But this could be what your going for, and if it is you can disregard everything I'm about to stay. I thought the girl in the song sounded a little desperate because she was just waiting for this guy that obviously didn't want her to pay attention to her. Also I think she was on the verge of being a stalker, wearing all the clothes from his clothing line and getting all his posters, this came off to me as a little creepy. I hope I wasn't being to harsh, best of luck.