Blackwood

I don't completely understand this, even after reading your explanation below. However I think you have some very nice imagery in here. Your poem raises me some questions. Is the ...

The thing that stood out the most to me in this was the alliteration. wrinkled, runny wrists, winding chickens and the children chase Scraping soil These all came to me ...

I was going to say that for a scholarship essay it really needs to be longer, however since it is heard and not read it is different. I think this ...

I really like the old style you have taken up. I feel like you could do it a little bit more to emphasis it. The first line for example, set ...

First thing first for this review is punctuation. 100% lack of punctuation and it really needs it. (I removed the spaces just so it wouldn't take so much room) I'm ...

As a writer myself I want to so desperately reach to people, touch people, be something, show the world something. From this poem I get a sense that conveys that, ...

Why is this in art? It should be in poetry. I think at the beginning some of your sentences have forgotten punctuation and also you keep putting capitals after commas ...

What a nice poem you have here. I like your range of birds as you dress the connotations to them. Did you try a layout where the sentences were on ...

This was an amazing poem. I like how you took something beautiful as the metaphor for something destructive and ugly, effectively making me as a reader feel like it is ...

Nice poem here, A few things I have t say as part of a review. I made a wish to wish upon a hope, I like the line but I ...

I really enjoyed this. It not only is a fun story but it also exposes some of the deadly flaws of Christianity. Opening up their eyes to this to show ...

Hey there, the title caught my attention, and you may see why, but as for a review lets go. Firstly punctuation and capital letters. In your main bulk of the ...

Review time: I know how you laid it out looks pretty and all, but to be honest I think that just sticking with a basic stuck to the left hand ...

Ok here is a review for you. The main thing I would like to raise an issue on is your change of perspectives. This is a short story. At the ...

Capitals. it fell down. I really liked this, it was an enjoyable read. I don't think your description under the title sells it very well though. And maybe the title ...