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Blackwood

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Exhausted

    This captures the essence of tiredness and also creates a nice impression of dreaminess. This makes me think about when I'm too tried to get out of bed in the ...

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Other » Lyrical, Other Re: Life is a journey

    Ok let me give you a quick rundown on formatting a song. If you are following a pop music structure or anything along that lines, yo should have the following ...

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: People

    Hello there! Here comes a review for review day. When I read this poem I feel.... it is a bit detached. Like it has no connecting idea or theme tying ...

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Realistic Re: Illusion - Prologue

    !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is very well written. Your words flow very nicely and build upon each other to create an image. I wan't you to know you have made a great ...

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Narrative Re: Mallinda Collins

    Yes I like this!!! I was scared it was going to be suicidal in which I would have probably stopped reading this, but it turned out very interesting, it captivated ...

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No More Apologies

    My first review for review day! I like this a ton. Firstly you need to check up your punctuation as you seem to have forgotten it in some places, but ...

    Sep 28, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Mayday Chapter 1

    Reviewy-view-view~ From her rucksack she pulls a small blanket, the girl also removes a small canteen of water and a bag of what seems to be food. I think this ...

    Sep 24, 2013
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Behavior Problems (The Bad Child Ep. 1)

    I like this, its well written and easy to read because of how well it flows. One thing I feel is that you didn't capture the mothers horrified and appalled ...

    Sep 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative Re: Lamb of God.

    Please do not get upset over this, but I am going to be blunt. I read this poem a while ago, and was going to review- but since you were ...

    Sep 20, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: a sickle in the dust

    Hey there Persy, you are one of my favourite poets on this site, and I didn't realize you wrote short stories too up until now. As far as a review ...

    Sep 19, 2013
  • Other » Other, Health Re: 10 Extremely Helpful Tips to Surviving (Most of) High School

    Good job! If only you posted this sooner. I have an exam tomorrow and I have been procrastination all week. Hell I even cleaned my room. MY ROOM; I couldn't ...

    Sep 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Hunters Mark

    It had been five minutes. F ive minutes wasted walking around in circles, doing nothing. I had been searching for a load of bs ???what? . And I kept finding ...

    Sep 17, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Dramatic Re: The Head.

    You know what goes well with romance? Blood Gore And creepiness. I love it. Hmm I'm trying to find something to review but its hard because you have done everything ...

    Sep 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Stalking- sometimes it's good...

    Yo. This is my perspective and I do not know your intentions and motives in writing this. First of all I felt it was really really random. At first it ...

    Sep 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rumored Friends

    Hello there! Nice little poem you have here. Lets give you a review. First things first, when I read this line: Casts the flourishing shadow of It feel very out ...

    Sep 14, 2013


The human heart has hidden treasures, in secret kept, in silence sealed...
— Charlotte Bronte