Blackwood

This has really nice imagery, I like it very much. There are so many lines which use really beautiful language. I especially like this line "I watch her full-bodied beams ...

First of all, whatever text editor you wrote this in, it has some issues when you copied it over to the publishing centre. All through your work there are words ...

Yo Megs. How are you? I'm good, I see you are still progressing along with this which is fantastic. I'm going to attempt to review this part, I just picked ...

On behalf of Corporate-Metropolitian Industries Incorporated Limited. , I am here to review this piece of terrorist activity. If I was you I would watch our for Americans because them ...

Hi, I see you must be new here. Anyway, this is the first review I have done in a long time, and logically it is when I am supposed to ...

I felt this chapter was much more structured than the last, and I was able to follow it easier with less confusion. It also gave up a bit of setting ...

I'm pretty sure I read this chapter in the past, but I didn't go any further than that. I was looking through the green room and decided I wanted to ...

Hey there, looks like you are in some need of feedback. Firstly and most importantly, your English grammar doesn't make much sense. In almost every line there in a incorrect ...

So, you have a nice start here. A very interesting establishment and you set yourself some nice prose. You obviously got lazy near the end, because it degrades rapidly and ...

Hello there. My main issue with this script is how you formatted it. You, for some reason, centred everything, and it makes it a pain to read. It would be ...

Greetings... lets see...Milanimo. Nice to see you have written a poem. I found this poem had a particularly good flow to it. I like how you ended each line and ...

Salutations on this most fine and dandy pokemon review day my dear. I am going to assume this is an extended short story, rather than a novel, since you have ...

I enjoyed reading this essay of yours. It was very interesting to read of your perception of the common issue named writers block, and I know I too have my ...

Love-chan. You are a good writer. You are one of the better writers I have seen around here. Your words make sense. They are NICE to read. They compel me ...

Going to give your character a review then. I think that posting detailed characters and descriptions for stories when you are unsure about a character or need feedback on them ...