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Biluata

Biluata

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Review Re: Not finished

    I am so sorry if I offended you, I've been told I come across to harshly in my reviews :/ I really did like this piece!

    Nov 12, 2015
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Dear Mother

    I know how you feel. I hope you have a wonderful day

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Dear Mother

    Hey there Mem! Luata here to do a review! I really, really like what you have done here. I was looking off to the side of the screen and I ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Chaos

    To bad about not marking it as a review! But thank you very much anyway.

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Chaos

    A fellow Sherlockian! *giggles in delight* Thanks for the review! I have written some other works and would be greatly pleased if you would read them. Genius does require an ...

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Eyes Are Mirrors

    Once again, thank you for your kind comment. This is my first post in months so I am so happy to get so much encouragement! You like smiley faces, don't ...

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Eyes Are Mirrors

    Thank you! And yeah, it does make sense to me, I'm used to rambling myself and hoping people can make some sense of it!

    Aug 21, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Soul of the Writer and Artist

    I remember the other one I read! The Soul of the Writer and the Artist or something to that effect! :P

    May 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I Mourn the Loss of Innocence

    Hey Ark! Thanks for the great review! As to your statement about the rhyme scheme, there isn't one, it was a free verse, if any of the lines rhymed, it ...

    Apr 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Imagine That

    Thanks Tuesday, for the review! I hope your day is wonderful.

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Imagine That

    Thank you Beatrice, it means a lot to hear things like that! I hope you'll check out some more of my stuff, I will certainly be poking around for yours!

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Ode To the Victim and the Killer

    Thanks Falconer!

    Apr 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Horror Re: Ode To the Victim and the Killer

    Thanks Reet. The formatting what a lot different in my original poem and I'm wondering if it would have made it a little more, it somehow got screwed up on ...

    Apr 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Ordadus- Chapter Six (Part One)

    BTW, I love your username, we share a common love, wolves!

    Apr 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: Papettomasuta (Puppet Master)

    Very good, very good. I agree with @godlypopo wholeheartedly. The only thing I would do is add commas and periods!

    Apr 6, 2015


Sometimes my life just sounds like surrealistic fiction being sold on clearance at the book store.
— J. G. Hammersmith