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Biluata

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Poem

    Hello there, Luata here to write you a review. It has been a notably long time since I've last written a review (I feel as though I write that for ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: It Could've Been Me: Ch3 (draft 2 version)

    Hello there! Luata here for a review. Admittedly, I've never really reviewed novel chapters, but I'll give it my best shot. Since I don't think that I've reviewed you before, ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: The Petals Fall at Night

    Hello there, Luata here for a review! Needless to say, I'm no expert so feel free to take my suggestions or leave them or contest them however you see fit. ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: take me back

    Hi there! Luata here for a review! It's been a while so I'm a bit rusty, but I'll do my best for you! Let it be noted that I am ...

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Fire

    Hello there! Luata here for a review! I'm finally getting used to writing reviews again, but it has been a while so I'm a bit rusty. For your information, I ...

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: hand in hand, i go nowhere

    Hello there! Luata here to leave you a review. Be forewarned that it has been forever since I've written any reviews on this site, so I'm a bit rusty. I ...

    Mar 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: The Tempest

    Hello there, Luata here to write a review. It's been a while again since I've written any reviews, so please forgive me if I go off on a tangent or ...

    Jan 31, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: To a Shadow

    Hello there, Luata here for a review. I've lapsed in my review writing, so forgive me if I cease to make a whole lot of sense. Since I don't think ...

    Jan 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: My Heart is in the Future

    Hello there, Luata here for a review. I don't think I've reviewed any of your weeks before so I'll go ahead and give you the run-down of how my reviewing ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: starlight

    Hello there, Luata here for a review! I'm not sure if I've reviewed you before or not, so I'll go ahead and give you the run-down of my reviewing style. ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Consolation Enough

    Hello there, Luata here for a review. Welcome to our little writing community, I noticed you're a new-ish member!! I hope you enjoy your stay! :) Anyway, since you have ...

    Jan 24, 2017
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Extra Blanc

    Hello there! Luata here for another review! I think I've reviewed you before, so you should know how this goes. My apologies if I stop making sense, my brain has ...

    Jan 19, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: REDACTED

    Hello there, Luata here for a review. It's a bit early in the morning, so you'll have to forgive me if I begin to be a bit nonsensical. Apparently when ...

    Jan 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Asymmetry and Marlon Brando

    Good morning! Luata here to write a review. It's a bit early in the morning, so you'll have to forgive me if I stop making sense. As I've told everyone ...

    Jan 19, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Every New Day

    Hello there, Luata here for a review. It's a bit early in the morning so you'll have to forgive me if I stop making sense. As I've said in all ...

    Jan 19, 2017


If I see an American in real life or a kiwi in a blockbuster, it feels surreal and weird, and like a funny trip.
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