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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 8.1 (LMS VI)

    I realize that I'm reviewing these chapters in out of order... having read each chapter as they came out I have remembered the bulk of it all but please bear ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 8.3 (LMS VI)

    The Choreography here is great! didn't have a difficult time envisioning it all as it happened and both sides of the fight were easily understandable, each section is phrased like ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 8.2 (LMS VI)

    I just want to say that I thoroughly enjoy how this series has been continuing on and improving in so many ways over time, not just in plot but the ...

    Feb 26, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon Chapter 6.2 (LMS VI)

    First off I want to say that I love the formatting of these chapters, almost feels dreamlike when each chapter ends with an action, it sort of feels like it ...

    Jan 15, 2023

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General
    Re: so easily

    I have listened to this song before reading and I def would recommend everyone else to, it really elevates the already thought provoking lyrics, I can't gush over sound's musicianship ...

    Jan 15, 2023

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: Rhyming "Jack"

    This was an enjoyable short poem, I love the choice of words and how you space out each section with enough substance and thought of their own to portray how ...

    Jan 13, 2023

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: an ode to absence

    What an incredibly thoughtful, tragically beautiful poem. That expression of disconnect in the beginning really resonates with me and my own experience, and I feel it perfectly sets the stage ...

    Jan 13, 2023

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General
    Re: brother, when?

    I really enjoyed both the lyrics - for their deep expression of longing for a loved one (and the pain that comes with it) and in how articulated and honest ...

    Jan 13, 2023

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: She Listens to Love Songs Waiting For You

    First off, I enjoy how this poem is paced, each stanza following the first is given enough time and thought to be their own visual piece. Great use of visually ...

    Jan 13, 2023

  • Other » Satire, Culture
    Re: On The Existence of Unlikely Races

    Hey there! I want to start this review off by saying that I enjoyed the read thoroughly, it emulates the writings of any notable man in the 1800s and captures ...

    Oct 22, 2019

  • Poetry » Literature, Other
    Re: I Bite my nails

    Wow this is a really good way to start off with your first poem, I'm really impressed in your knowledgable use of imagery, combining it with something a person would ...

    Oct 22, 2019

  • Poetry » General, Science Fiction
    Re: millennia from now

    Very nice imagery, and I like the use of the break with "but memory is gone." I felt a little confused at first when i saw (at least on my ...

    Oct 22, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: The Lost Dragon 18.3

    I forgot to review this one lol, Again, I really enjoy the narration, it's never dragged on for too long, and with every chapter there is a recognizable scene (at ...

    Oct 17, 2019


Writing is the geometry of the soul.
— Plato