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Re: What we hold.
I agree with Jordin and say you take out the "mine". It seems out of place :/ But, I like the fact you have your own style! That's a sign ...
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Re: Moving on
Belle here to review! You're an amazing poet! I love they way you rhyme and use such good words! And I understand this poem...I can really relate!I especially like the ...
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Re: Wish
This...leaves me speechless. Ayden, you are an amazing writer. No matter what you look like or what they think you are truly amazing. I think I'm crying right now...wow. This ...
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Re: Goodbye, Butterfly
Belle here to review! Oh this is just beautiful! Oh soo sooo lovely Ma'dear
May 25, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad of the Half-Eaten Examinee
Because I can't really understand som of the words in here, I'm jus gonna leave it at GREAT JOOOB! no, I really liked this. I really can't find fault with ...
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Re: History
Hey! Belle here to review :3 This is short and simple, which is okay, but that means it's not very descriptive. which in this poem, Is true. Where is the ...
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Re: Fire
wow. As usual, your poetry takes me to a new place. It moves me. And again, I am amazed at how you use c=barely any words and can still move ...
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Re: Red
Belle here to review! This is nice! It's so interesting and...I don't know....tempting maybe? Like, a roller coaster that get's faster every turn....or a mystery that doesn't get solved and ...
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Re: 33%
Hey! Belle here to review
May 25, 2013 -
Re: you...
Hi! I'm Belle and this is my first review so sorry if it's bad :3 Hart is actually *heart. watch you spelling!! I'm sorry if I seem like I'm being ...
May 25, 2013
