BellaRoma

Thanks. Weirdly enough, the thing about the parents, I'm coming back to in the chapter I'm writing. The next two are more about how Layla is coping. I liked writing ...

One word: rewrite. Will do. I apologise for the plot holes. Thanks for your honesty. Next chapter introduces Sara...

The song was Because Of You, but Breakaway is a stunning album. Thank you for seeing the meaning. I will work on comments. I wrote this before those, though and ...

Next chapter you see the conclusion... Interestingly, the song, Because Of You, was meant to relate to her. At first I thought she was singing about Doc, then I had ...

Thanks! Weirdly, the computer wanted me to change more keen and more brusque. Guess you're on to something. :-) Ooh, you haven't seen much of Dr Aiden yet. He's the ...

I had a feeling I was wrong. Like I said, I'm waiting for Chapter 29. You've given me a book to follow and review (albeit awkwardly). More questions...

You have a point about the body control (she did it in Chapter 1 if you can remember that far). I would still say Layla is in charge. Mercy has ...

My turn to do the guessing hehe!

Hey. Let's have a Double Digits party! Time for another Mercy chapter! You can see the dream from her perspective. I suppose you've been waiting for her view of Sara ...

Dr Aiden (Aiden is his surname) wasn't trying to kill Layla. He locked her in the room, not the mortuary boxes. Keep in mind also that he knows nothing of ...

I wanted to go back to the machine and this is what I came up with. Also, I kind of felt how far Aiden has wormed into Layla's head. Does ...

Thanks for your review. I seriously need to rewrite, but I start school again soon so not yet. I do intend to clean this up eventually. Earlier I did mention ...

Sorry you're confused. :-( As to the morgue, leaning towards the suicide idea... He locked her in there as an alternative to the shock therapy. When I eventually rewrite I ...

Okay. Thanks for the tips. I'll definitely be busy fixing stuff later... See you next chapter!

Yes, Layla is presumed mentally unstable so they're in an asylum. For future reference, Mercy has the ability to take over Layla's body. That's what was going on since they ...