-
Re: How Could You?
Hello, Teddybear22, I'm BellaRoma, here with a review on this lovely piece :) Sadly, I don't know a lot about poetry, so this review will probably be quite short. I ...
Feb 27, 2015 -
Re: Sober
Hi, amytheghost3 - nice to meet you! Welcome to YWS. I'm BellaRoma, and I'm going to review this to get it out of the green room for you. First of ...
Feb 24, 2015 -
Re: Burning
Hey, Bobster28! I'm BellaRoma. Congratulations on your first work, first of all. You know what this reminded me of? Final Destination.... The guy has a terrible dream/premonition, waking up seconds ...
Feb 14, 2015 -
Re: And the dream comes true......not chapter 4
Hey, Siya! It's me again... So, this was an interesting chapter. This storyline just keeps getting better! I'm glad you explained what tutores are.... I really can't wait to see ...
Feb 11, 2015 -
Re: And the dream comes true.........not chapter:3
Bella here again! I shall be the first to review this lovely new chapter.... I guess that means I'm following your story. Once again, I need to praise you for ...
Jan 31, 2015 -
Re: And the dream comes true......not- chapter:2
Hello, siyasingh - BellaRoma (I also answer to Bella or Bells) here to review your novel. Loving your avatar. I have read the first chapter and this with interest. By ...
Jan 29, 2015 -
Re: Affinity 7.1 Avery
Hi, Timmy - I decided I'd get here early this time XD I have to say, there are no obvious nitpicks this chapter, it's just that good! I have very ...
Nov 19, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 6 Ally
Hiya, Timmy, I'm here for my last review before I'm caught up. I said I was binge reviewing :-P Nitpicks There is just one quibble that I noticed. Supposedly, the ...
Nov 15, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 5.4 Ally
Oh-kay, I know right away this will be a short one. Still, I feel like I should share my thoughts. I'll knock this out before I go to bed, then ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 5.3 Ally
Okay, Timmy, here's the deal. I'm about to binge review your novel hehe! It is seriously about time I caught up, so this is my attempt to get stuck in. ...
Nov 14, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 5.2 Ally
Hi again Timmy. Just getting this chapter out of the way. Reading it again, there isn't a lot to say. I have no nitpicks and everyone else has covered a ...
Nov 4, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 5.1 Ally
Sorry, Timmy, I have read these, but haven't caught up review-wise. Lets start now, shall we? This will probably be short as I would like to catch up and talk ...
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: Trembling Power: Chapter Five
Hey Writer and Raven. Bella here to review because this is awesome and Writer has been following Imaginary Friends, so I must return the favour... I saw this and I ...
Oct 15, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 4.3 Avery
Hiya Timmy. I've finally got around to reviewing this. I'm on mobile, so this probably won't be detailed. You are giving more information away now. I feel like the mysterious ...
Sep 27, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 4.2 Avery
Hi Timmy, I skipped the last chapter because I think I had already read most of the information before. Like I say, this is in return for your awesome reviews. ...
Sep 24, 2014
