Bella

Well, I think using questions in a poem can turn out really great, depending on how you do it. There wasn't much depth, and I felt no emotion at all ...

This didn't grab my attention right away, which isn't a good thing. If it doesn't grab my attention, I usually won't read all of it. Anywho, the first thing I ...

Hey Linds! This poem wasn't....really...a poem. I'm not sure what it would be...I loved it though; it had great emotion. Even though it never happened to you, it had the ...

Oh, is this about your dog? I'm pretty sure it is, but I figured I'd check. Because I know the whole life thing, I kind of get what's going on, ...

SPLEE!!! Sorry, I got excited when I saw this, and that was my happy shout. Anywho, BellaLuna! You have my name...well, part of it. And, I love this series...Sorry, I ...

It was a wonderful start, in my opinion; especially on such a dark subject. I think it could use a bit of work, but Claudette (as usual) said most of ...

I agree with Rigel, you certainly wanted to write a silly poem. Silly poems are really great, (just look at Shel Silverstein), But they still need to make some sense. ...

Hmm...I liked this at the beginning, but about half way through the first part (Glitter?) it seemed to get really, as Evangelina said, repeatative. I liked the general concept, but ...

I loved the idea of it; it's almost like a sick obsession type of love...a lot of the guys at school bug me about how I can't do anything because ...

This sounds like most of my poetry when I first write it; I like the general idea of it. I'm gonna do like Matt did and just go through the ...

This poem seems a little....I don't want to say shallow, that sounds bad. It's definitely cliched, but that isn't necessarily a bad thing. It needs more depth; more emotion. It ...

I haven't read much of your work, so I can't compare it to your other stuff, but I didn't think it was really bad, nor absolutely wonderful. It didn't seem ...

I really like the idea...or plot, for lack of a better word. I think it has a lot of potential; but, as something euclidean said, this is the usual take ...

Toast, this was laugh out loud funny. I don't know why, but I found it hilarious. There was, like, no feeling though. It was almost like a short story, or ...

Yeah, Alice, I was going through rereading this, and I made a few small notes. Some of it's a little confusing, like you could put a bit more detail. I ...