BelarusBirdy

Yay! Your stories never disappoint. I wanted something short to read that wouldn't take a lot of time because I'm lazy (as you should know well Tally-wa) and this is ...

Oh. My. Gosh. Stop getting better at writing and let me catch up, Tally! This is so true. I love the imagery and everything. The end is awesome. Seriously, stop ...

This is like something I would think except my version would be darker and quite possibly contain death and/or knives. I really like it, it makes sense to me in ...

Hi, I'm Bel. I'll be reviewing London Bridge Prologue today. The room's spinning. Twisting like carnival rides. Turning ike wheels. Swiviling like heads. Like eyes. Like bodies, and arms, and ...

Most haiku is about nature and things that relate to the natural world. They are beautiful if they are good. Yours is different from some. Take it from me (I'm ...

I write for the same reason. I've had a lot of pain in the last few days? weeks? months? I don't bother keeping track of the time. I'm so glad ...

This is a pretty accurate depiction of what I believe depression to be like, except I never thought of it as a door. I think of it being like you ...

My family and I went to see it in Chicago. It's amazing!!!!!!!! :D I love it! I love at the end of "Defying Gravity" when she flies up in the ...

Hi! I'm Bel, and I'll be reviewing your poem today. First, let me start by talking about the general things. Your rhyme scheme could have been a bit cliched, but ...

It's a little difficult to review it without it being here, but I would like to say I thought the emotions in this piece were strong and very apparent as ...

Whoa! This is really good! I love it! It's easy to understand, a quick read, not long, not too deep and full of meaningful hidden little secrets. I like it. ...

I'm still reading this, don't worry. It's an amazing story. I kind of want to print it out and read it again and again. OR you could get it published. ...

This is, simply put, beautiful. I love the natural feel of it, raw and imperfect, but it all works and flows smoothly. It makes me think of the rain (obviously!) ...

Okay, that is really weird. :) Sounds like something I would say. Quietly. In the middle of math class. Or maybe science class. Wow. This reminds me of all my ...

Welcome to YWS, first of all. I really like your poem, it's a wonderful idea. I think the rhyme scheme is good. I see you've discovered "slant rhymes," so your ...