Published June 30, 2011
Quiet, quick hands
Quick, smile, smile, smile
Bump, be silent, Slip slide
Found
Don't jerk, in-out, triumph
Blend away
Rip, quick, flip
Search, repeat
Two down, 5 2 ->
Wrist flip, tattoo
My mask, dissapears, comes back
"Thief!"
Run.
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I love this poem. It's short, but very well written. As far as I can tell it is original. I like how you presented it. Keep up the great work and welcome to Young writers society!
Just wanted to say welcome and you have a very unique poem. It is short but to the point and it makes my mind conjour up images of a thief!
Keep writing,
~FW~
Whoa! This is really good! I love it! It's easy to understand, a quick read, not long, not too deep and full of meaningful hidden little secrets. I like it. No, I don't like it. I love it. Why doesn't this site have a love button?!!!
Keep Writing,
Bel
P.S. Welcome to YWS!!! It's fun and amazing. I've already gotten a bit better from writing, and I haven't had an account too long. It's so awesome when you get good reviews. Even a very detailed review that finds a lot of flaws is awesome.
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