BehindtheMask

Hi Matt! I enjoyed this poem because it is written in such an agressive yet sincere manner. I can very much feel the emotions in this piece, and you portray ...

Hi Bunny! I really enjoyed this! It's unlike anything I've read before and written beautifully. I can very much envision the emotions your MC is speaking of. I also love ...

Hi Gracie, I'm going to be completely honest. This, here, is hardly a poem. Writing a few so-called "deep" words and making them in poem format does not make a ...

That was very well written! I like that you made it very short, giving us hardly any knowledge of your MC except for a name and a vague appearance. I ...

Wow, Sofie! As promised :D As far as plot goes that was absolutely interesting. I was very intrigued and I think that "Things were pretty shit." is a fantastic hook. ...

Hi Matthews! I must say I really enjoyed this poem. It was a beautiful portrayal of the night sky and very descriptive. I can clearly picture the sky as you've ...

Hi Velvet :) Well, I can guarentee this might come off as a tad harsh, but I'll try the best I can. I think the rhyme scheme is too forced. ...

Hi again lele :D Nitpicks: Dear, Peer Pressure Put the comma after pressure. In a letter, it always goes Dear *name*, and so on. You've come to know me as ...

I liked it :D It was cute and amusing. You may think you're entertaining Italicize "you" to put emphasize on it, and put a comma after entertaining. It feels bare ...

Amusing. ^_^ It's something all of us dedicated readers can relate to, and thus made me laugh. I swear, I'm not drunk. I think the comma is unneeded. I had ...

Hello PinkPanther. I liked it, I enjoy those "expressing individuality" type support groups/poems/songs, etc. They're all sweet and stuff. Okay, first of all, the rhyme scheme was unorganized and slop

Hi Lele! Funny, I wrote a poem a bit ago with the same title. The dark shields our eyes It battles the truth and the lies I'm confused why these ...

I love that you did this! Remembering Sunday is one of my favorite songs :D I thought it was really interesting. I never really thought of the girl committing suicide, ...

Hey! Okay, I'm first going to warn you that this is my first script review and that honestly, I have no interest in reading scripts so this is uncharted territory ...

I liked this very much! It reminds me of a mix between Tropic Thunder and Hot Fuzz. Like everything is said very fast but in a serious tone and it's ...