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Aww thanks love :) Oh yeah you definitely got the point and overall message of the poem. And thanks so much for the silly vowel punctuation I did at the ...

Thanks so much love... really appreciate the last bit :) Cheers!

Haha wow! I see you have not hit the jackpot, but just to give you a hint it is a very detailed and descriptive poem written of person (girl) rinsing ...

Welcome :)

Thanks winter257 (interesting username) Please do check my other hot stuff too... Cheers! wolfie

Haha... your nasty! Jokes :)

Haha... your nasty! Jokes :)

Interesting choice of words...(pleasing to the ear, maybe haha) Hate to say this but... i have no idea what you are trying to convey. Well maybe i do... but just ...

Oh! gee know I get it. Great job though :) Cheers!

Hey there IronSpark, Just to be clear this is not about a mermaid or the sea so the first suggestion I would have to decline. About the 'genes' - well ...

Damn! I didn't really thought i had much mistakes. Gosh! Thanks a lot Artemis28 (interesting chose of name?username?). Well i didn't really went through this short story, just wrote it ...

Thanks for the lengthy review. Obviously your trying to gain points from this review (we all are). It was intensely helpful! Gee! you made me had to go through this ...

Hate to admit but i won't agree with you. I can see you go for the grammatically corrections and sentence structure. Which is not needed/ignored in a poem. First of ...

Wow thanks that was helpful darling! (quite lengthy) Gee! got the spelling wrong 'gasping'. Thanks to your gorgeous eyes i wouldn't have noticed that. (F.Y.I i don't have an eye ...

First of all RagingLive, You keep on smiling cause i have no reason to smile (a lot that is). Haha jokes.. Okay thanks for your lengthy review. Obviously your here ...