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Well I agree about the rhyming tips you gave me because I see it is a structured poem but I just tipped in few bits and pieces...but anyways appreciate your ...

Thanks love, appreciated the complimenting review. Made my day Jpwriter (interesting username)! I can see you are new to YWS so welcome aboard mate. I like your review B.T.W it ...

hello? Who already posted that...:) you must be on some drugs...jokes

Also about the 'money' 'honey', I was referring to those women who are sex workers who get beat up too, and honey s what all men say to women so ...

Thanks Makenna for the necessary corrections and your suggestions. I will fix the odds and polish up the bits. Thanks love, Cheers!

awww steggy thanks darling for the review! Will mend those broken pieces together. Cheers!

Wow well interesting name though :) cheers!

Hehe chill out I know you feel the vibe dude! Well this poem is my own. I was inspired to write it due to own experiences, well recent experiences. This ...

Three words only from me to you; "Lengthy but compelling" The ending was quite satisfying. I like the idea of her as a map. Him as a foreigner exploring her. ...

Thanks steggy for the helpful recommendations. About the 'skilfully' I am 100 % sure its not a spelling error. I also used 'she' to create an impact the reader. I ...

Thanks so much ChocolateCello for your compliments, appreciated them! But about the surrender and unwillingly, I am pretty much confident as to why I chose these words :) The rug ...

Thanks so much, totally made my day! I will consider the recommendations you stated above love, Cheers!

Thanks for the lengthy review love :) Will consider the recommendations Cheers!

Thanks again (really)! I hope read more of your poems too Cheers!