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  • Short Story » Culture, Realistic Re: School Life -- Part One

    Wow you got a powerful point there young one. Expressing ones feeling is another thing but revealing most people's is another thing. And you my friend have just written down ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Beauty in a Thousand Words or Less

    Hey there myjaspercat (interesting name, username?) Here for a brief review darling. Got to admit that though you have written this poem 5 months ago (just took me 5 minutes ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Deleted 58

    Hey there Ysayle! Here very a sneaky review. So i have to say this a good piece you have there love. Thought i usually like rhyming poems and shorter stanzas ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 7

    Hey there Becky here for a short review. (they to keep it short) Wow i like this piece of baby you got there. You definitely put a lot of time ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Ochre-Eyed, Ocean Mists

    oooh! I like it a lot..like soo much! Haha review time... Okay! Splendid work you got there mate. First of all this so pleasing to the ears, especially when I ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Pause

    Wow! Great splendid touching work you have there my fellow poet. Wow (again!)! this poem must have took time and effort body, soul and your mechanising mind to produce such ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: fire everyday

    Wow! Okay nice! I see you've definitely have a point behind these blanket of fine art. This a major problem in the lives of teens and children. Overprotective parents and ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Internet Explorer

    Gosh finally a short humours definitely meaningful poem. Wow mmm splendid! A brilliant work of art expressed or I'll say squeezed in a few bits of words. You probably figured ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Flyers and Runners

    Hey, Wow! Interesting choice of format layout for your poem with all those dots (fullstops?) between paragraphs. Different but ..its a good different. Pretty impressive with chose of words you ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Waltz With me

    Damn girl! Can someone just turn the music up and hand over a partner for me to dance! This poem is splendid seƱorita! Very pleasing to the ears and gives ...

    Sep 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: Living Monsters

    Okay..wow! Interesting plot you got there. So this is about a couple with marriage issues and their daughter who's friend is a supernatural being (ghost). So Tim is not so ...

    Sep 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: love

    Damn! You got me reciting this beautifully written work of art...mmm so captivating and simple too. Very detailed in such a short way. A long messaged summarised in a fewer ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Not enough

    A simple moving work of art! Wow! loving it! Painting a picture of perseverance and aiming high. Despite circumstances keep trying and moving high. I like the theme behind this ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why must we fight?

    OOh this poetry seem to convey a message about people fighting because of no expressed opinions I see. Wow good. Looks like a free verse to me. That's a common ...

    Sep 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Steps into the Mirror (Until it Wasn't) - 1/?

    Okay interesting story there...but you should have used 'I' instead of Geal tells, Geal sees, Geal says, Geal brings and you know what I mean. It would have been much ...

    Sep 24, 2015


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