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  • Poetry » Humor, Literature Re: Around me

    Hello, i am here to review this poem. I liked it very much because i believe it is very genuine and heartfelt. I love how much unity between you and ...

    May 28, 2020
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: At night

    Hello. This is an enticing poem about the things that go bump into the bight and about how they affect other people's psyche. In order to defend oneself from imagined ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Wounds of Love

    Hello, Em16 this is a beautiful and sad poem that i can relate to. Indeed nothing cuts worse than heartbreak. I like how you expressed the pain, esepecially these lines. ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: This Heartbreak Hit Different

    Hello, i'm here to review this poem. I love it because i can relate to the feeling of heartbreak and the way you described it is accurate. Although i did ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Snow White

    I love this poem. Your descriptions are very beautiful, like i'm staring enraptured at a field of beautiful gems while i'm reading. I feel for poor Snow White... I love ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My Sister, The Butterfly

    Hello, i really loved this touching poem, especially since it is dedicated to your younger sibling. The fact that you shaped the poem like a butterfly makes it even more ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: This is it.

    Hello YoursTruly, this is indeed a very dramatic poem. It is very tragic how the children in the dark room are kidnapped before they were grown and have to suffer ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: .

    Hello, Stellarjay. Your poem is indeed very realistic as it tells about human nature and the choices one has in this life. On one hand a robbed person can report ...

    May 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Fear and Confidence

    I like how this poem shows how fear and confidence van inflienve us in stressful times and even in times were we feel in our element. I love how you ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Disney songs poem

    Hello, MoonIris I think it is clever how you incorporated the disney songs into your poem. Sadly i only recognized two of them. When will my life begin, and painting ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: .

    Hello, your poem is beautiful and it also reminds me of my favourote season. I like how it is like an ode to spring with beautiful flowers, chirping birds and ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: expectations

    Hello, dreamgirlsky I like how this poem shows the struggles we all have to face in order to achieve great things. The one hardship that can be either friend or ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Good ole' broccoli

    Hello, Gravitem. I really like this poem. I think the part where you said it tasted like a miniature tree, even though you've never tasted one was really funny. And ...

    May 25, 2020


This is the way the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper.
— T.S. Eliot