Hello, i'm here to review this poem. I love it because i can relate to the feeling of heartbreak and the way you described it is accurate. Although i did not cry after my sort of breakup, i can understand why one would do that, to sort of numb the pain. I like how at first the heart starts beating rapidly because of sadness and pain only to slower faster and slower, but not for the ex lover...The element of thanatos is very well put, because in a relationship two souls are like in a symbiosis, you can't separate them without consequences for at least one of them. I can feel the sadness in this sentances
"I curl.
My body into the tiniest ball,
Interlocking my wrists,
Building a safety net out of my limp bones.
This way I can stop my skin from crawling out,
of the many many holes in my body that are cut out.
But my head stops getting air,
As I squeeze my hands tighter around my knees"
It gives me the chills too, which is awesome because a breakup poem should be tragic with a little horror, at least that's my opinion.
I think it's a little natural that she would remember her boyfriend's eyes and be nostalgic about its green colour.
Points: 87
Reviews: 43
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