Bambi

i will keep that in mind haha

haha, i love yours better! grr yes extremely bored and avoiding my real work.

No problem haha

I wasn't for sure haha.. Not the best at that.. An your welcome :)

haha Its fine, an Thank you.

No problem haha :P

Thanks you hobo haha :P

Thank you so much! Yes the poem is about me, just a past relationship i was in. Thought it would be a good idea to right it down.

Thank you! Not good with spelling or anything. Next time i am defiantly using spell check.

Thanks for the review. I agree with you that it needs more detail. I think im going to most likely add some more to it for sure. Thank You!

Your review was great. Thank you!

I really liked all of the emotion you put in this. It kinda makes you feel what your saying and i like that in anything i read. kinda puts you ...

I love it haha XD

"Between mother anddaughter." Space between and daughter. Besides that I didn't see anything wrong. It was written perfectly! Flowed really nice to me. Loved it!

ohhh, ok haha. Sorry not feeling well so everything is confusing to me. Loved this Short story!