BaByLa1989

Thanks for your comment, it was appreciated. :D

Thank you for your comment. Yes it is a lesson built into the poem, also the other lesson that i hope my readers (especially females) would get out of it ...

Thanks for the "heads-up". as you can see i made the changes :D and definitely i would keep writing. And also, you should check out my other poetry, especially my ...

how about "Military vs Civilian" or "Children of two different worlds"

time check out my poems and leave a review.

Ok, well put some more work into it and bring out that idea by the choices of words you use.

I am from the Caribbean and "Chocolate tea" is a normal phrase. more-ish in this case was the feeling that you want more another phrase deriving out of the Caribbean ...

this was really nice.

thanks much aragi. As you can see i made the change. My advice to you is to keep writing and write harder when you don't feel like writing. write even ...

thanks much :)

thanks for the comment :)

the first parafraph started off with a comparison of winter with that of a double sided knife, because like the knife it can be use for good and for bad, ...

my dear Charlie, i do appreciate your comment. It shows that I have some great skills is writing reading comprehensions. :) It is my original work. thanks much for your ...

i will.

hey sorry about the writing had it in a PDF format but i copied it to word and fixed it before uploading it so its better now, also i have ...