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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I Feel Guilty

    hey, most people don't like it when poets write about stuff only known to them but me on the other hand, I love it. This was so original so personal ...

    Aug 14, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A portrait of Aphrodite

    This is a very beautiful poem, I am in love with greek mythology and i love how you managed to craft it into a poem. Well, aside from the greek ...

    Aug 11, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: 2am rant from a writer who hasn't written written fiction in a long time

    i usually only review poetry because i tend to find articles and chapters way too lengthy, this on the other hand caught my eye and rightly so. this is very ...

    Aug 7, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dystopic Visions

    I am I, you are gifted. this is truly perfect, firstly, it is packed with sense, symbolism, direct address and just well written . I loved it and it also ...

    Aug 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Amsterdam, after the show

    I am not going to lie. I had to read this three times.. it is complex yet simple, crazy yet sane, relatable yet unrelatable. In short, I LOVED IT. I ...

    Aug 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Someday

    Firstly, this is very beautiful! I can feel the love and the need and that is what makes this so remarkable. this poem is brief but a lot is being ...

    Aug 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Raw

    Well, this is loaded with emotion. You are expressing a lot within these few words and I think its amazing. Loneliness is a feeling that leaves you in the dark ...

    Jul 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: August

    Let me just say that this is deep. Like honestly I didn't know what to think after reading this..lol. Clearly, the speaker feels the need to escape /find peace in ...

    Jul 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Humor, Politics Re: a thinly-veiled allegory

    I had to read this twice..lol. On a serious note though I love what you are doing with your words. You marked this as politics and rightly so. This poem ...

    Jul 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Icy fire that freezes my heart

    This is truly beautiful, the persona is a possessive lover who you have managed to portray so well. This poem is packed with symbolism but I feel like you need ...

    Jul 17, 2020


it's ok, death by laughter was always how i've wanted to go out
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