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  • Other » General, General Re: An Aphorism

    I like how you included the definition of "aphorism" in the beginning, I think it added a lot. I like how you mentioned that we need to help ourselves. I ...

    Feb 11, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Essence of Life

    I really enjoyed this poem. I think the idea of the "essence of life" is a very common theme in poetry, but I think you executed it in a very ...

    Feb 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: not for a lack of words

    This is honestly one of the most beautiful poems I have every read. Reading phrases like "moulding to the safe embrace and sweeping downturn of your smiling eyes" made me ...

    Feb 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: boy, i

    This is an amazing poem, and giiirrrrl, you are better off without him. I really enjoyed the overall set up of the stanzas, and I think the structure really helped ...

    Jan 14, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Rough, Uneven Edges

    I really enjoyed this to be honest, and I definitely relate to it on a personal level! Please, keep up the amazing work! Just a thought, maybe keep it as ...

    Jan 14, 2020
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Why Opposites Attract

    First off let me just say how much I love the title of your short story! 'Opposites attract' is such a general phrase, and I find it interesting v that ...

    Jun 20, 2016
  • Short Story » General, Other Re: About Eden

    This was an intriguing story to stumble upon. The title I like because it just explains what it is about. The story is about Eden. I love her name by ...

    Jun 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Anonymous

    So I was intrigued to write a review because of the title (I haven't read the poem yet) but then I read the last line, so I'd try my very ...

    Mar 16, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, Romantic Re: Ice Skating, Ice Breaking

    Hi! Before I start I just want to say that I loved your description. It gave me a look at the story, as it's meant to do, and what it ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Frozen Light

    Hi! I'm just going to start out by saying I really your title. But I have a question. Are you just meaning that it's frozen in the day, and that's ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Politics Re: The Distant Dream

    I've never reviewed a political piece on this website, although I thought yours looked really interesting. It is so true how the world could be at peace from past experiences, ...

    Dec 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life is a Dream, What of Reality?

    Hi, I thought your poem looked interesting so I decided to leave a review for you. I hope it helps, but I'm sure you have no errors. First I'd just ...

    Dec 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Continued

    Hey! So I read your description and I find it really interesting. So I am going to write you a review. First let me ask, is this your challenge or ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Missing

    Hi! I didn't see any mistakes, which is great, so I'm just gonna go ahead and talk about it: I really liked in the description you put that this is ...

    Oct 16, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: First Love

    Hey! This seemed like an interesting concept, and I am interested in what you're going to do with it. So I am going to give you review, I bet I'll ...

    Oct 16, 2015


Daddy Long Legs are more closely related to crabs than spiders and somehow the idea of crablike creatures with spider legs that have escaped the entrappings of the primordial sea and now crawl over land and can walk up and down walls and ceilings creeps me more than I can adequately describe.
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