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  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic
    Re: Perhaps

    NIIIIIIIIICCCCEEEE. You had to pull daphne out of retirement though. I like the idea. We've all been through this before. As in a show reference, "It's like you wanna crawl ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Abecedarian (LMS 1)

    This was really, really, really good. Some of the words were confusing, in the fact that I didn't understand your meaning. I like how you used such rich imagery. It ...

    Sep 20, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: Document

    I like this poem. The shortness of each stanza seems to fit just right with the poem. I like the subtle description that you sneak into each line and the ...

    Aug 31, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: The Art of Atelophobia

    Wow. God damn, that hit hard. I love this poem, the falling and rising and sinking art. One critique is I felt like this would have hit harder if you ...

    May 23, 2022

  • Poetry » Humor, Humor
    Re: The Great God of Writing

    I like the humor of this work, especially, "Should I write crap. they'd chuck lightning". That had me rolling. I like the simplicity of this work. No big words, it ...

    May 23, 2022

  • This poem is truly touching, in a weird sort of way. I'm a fan of your poetry. Understandable and deep at the same time just like poems should be. The ...

    Mar 3, 2022

  • Poetry » General, Other
    Re: Dusk is in these lights.

    This is a very good poem. The descriptive imagery is eye-opening and paints a vivid picture in your head. The last sentence is oddly placed. The capitalization of and is ...

    Feb 24, 2022

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic
    Re: Estranged

    Okay. Lets start by saying that the beginning is good. It makes you wonder about sam, but you do an amazing job describing him. That being said, your ending was ...

    Nov 30, 2021

  • Short Story » Narrative, Health
    Re: “You know you’ll die, right?”

    This poem is amazing. It tells a story that just resonates with me. Not particularly because I have experience, and that's what I like about this poem. You don't need ...

    Jul 28, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: you aren't in love, you're just lonely

    Oof, I love this poem so much. Seeing that there are no reviews I will go ahead and give one. There's nothing you can do to fix it. Well, maybe, ...

    Jul 12, 2021

  • Short Story » Realistic, Satire
    Re: The NETWORK.

    I like this artsy way you wrote it. But I am confused by some things is Maxx the same MaXx. I think you should clear that up. The idea is ...

    Jun 21, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Solamente Mi

    First things first, I love your first two lines. They are intriguing and make you want to read more. There are some confusing lines, but since I am no poetry ...

    May 27, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 12

    You know I like your story a lot. So this piece, I think, is really good. Unlike @MailicedeNamedy I do not think this chapter is rushed, but do not just ...

    May 26, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, General
    Re: Ashwater Creek - Ch. 1.1

    Wow, I L-O-V-E this story. The flow is very nice, it's enviable. That's the best way to put it. From a writer to a fellow writer, this is amazing. The ...

    May 21, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Dramatic
    Re: No Witnesses, Pt. 4

    This is chilling, I mean, I won't be able to sleep tonight. The husband is an emotional and physiological mess, he is terrifying. I like the part where he talked ...

    May 20, 2021

Don't be pushed around by the fears in your mind. Be led by the dreams in your heart.
— Roy T. Bennett