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I loved it, but I have notes: You need to work on your punctuation. You need to use capitals! Other than those two notes you did very well. You have ...

This is a poem of deep emotion. I can tell that you feel strongly about your friend, it is cool that you can write a poem so deep in thought. ...

The length is understandable. Haiku's are usually short, and this says a lot in such short three lines. I like how it touches on the subject of heaven and being ...

This is a really cool and I think that it would be a nice song. I like how you compared life to several things. You compared life to: A dream, ...

The whales are a good metaphor for a song. The dream is interesting, I

It was interesting. I enjoyed how you learned nothing about French. I also like how you learned about dourness, the poem was interesting. I like how that you care about ...

Very bold and out there. I think it's a little unpredictable. But I like how you are very descriptive. Question: Is this 4 separate poems? I like how it takes ...

Very interesting. I wanted to keep reading but the words stopped. It was amazing, and thrilling. I agree it does remind me of a witch burning. I always liked mythology. ...

I wear glasses too, this is a very in depth perception on yourself. I like how you stopped caring and won't let your flaws get to you! Everyone is unique ...

Very interesting view on reality in general. But a little veg. Keep writing!

Very interesting poem. I like the first verse best!

A strong story! I could feel the emotion radiating from the characters. The story fits the title perfectly.