Authorian

Okay, first off, it's a very interesting idea. The moment it's revealed what he can do, I wanted to read more. Second, it's well paced, though the beginning feels like ...

Okay, wow. As a rule, I never like retelling of classic stories. But you made it brand new. I was never pulled out of the story by bad grammar or ...

This is so cute! I can feel the incredible emotion flowing from this poem. As I read I could feel the light and breezy feel this poem gives. It makes ...

This is a nice poem. The story is very plain and easy to understand. My personal favorite part is 'May stain and will scar The precious earth.' It's true and ...

Wow. This is the kind of poem that you read at a break neck pace. Then you finish, sit back, and consider what you just read, and you're just like ...

This makes me think of all pets. They love you, know you feed them, enjoy everything if you love them back. But sometimes they just don't understand. They smell a ...

This is a very well written poem, with a clear and understandable story. At first I felt sorry for 'her' whoever she is. Than for the narrator, pain coursing through ...

Hey! Authorian here for a review! Nice story. I'm a fan of futuristic stories, and you put a nice twist on a common base. (What if humans didn't have the ...

Excellent revision! You added more detail and I especially noticed the ending flowed better with the rest of the story. A few grammatical mistakes, I corrected them below. In the ...

Nice poem. One itsy bitsy grammar mistake. In the 'What is love' third line, put 'the' or 'a' between 'of' and 'plan'. Besides that, I like it. I've actually thought ...

Are you SERIOUS this has been featured for TWO DAYS I finally thought 'Oh, I guess I'll check it out.' And I got... Wet Triangle I thought this would be ...

A nice poem it sounds like its nice but I don't understand what your trying to portray. A ghost? God? An angel? The earth? Nature? I don't know. It sounds ...

One grammatical mistake- your smileS make me (or) your smile makeS me. Besides that, nice, simple, sweet poem. It sweetly describes how a crush makes you feel. Your words were ...

Again, I have chills. This is a rare book, where it is wonderful even if I can't quite put my finger on why. The reactions were realistic and fit what ...

I'm getting chills. This is a great introduction. You are a great writer. I can HEAR the ACCENTS. I love the atmosphere and the description of the book house. The ...