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Hello!!! Authorian here for a revewww~~ This was a little confusing, but nice to read all the same. It was simple and I think it was mostly metaphorical, which I ...

Hell0! Authorian here~~ Welcome to Young Writers Society! I hope you enjoy the site as much as so many others (including myself) do! In your comment, you said you don't ...

Authorian here for a review~~ Excellent work! I got the sense that whoever was writing this was serious about it, which I'm sure, as a writer, wasn't overly easy for ...

Hello! Authorian here for a reviewwww~~ First, this story felt like absolute poetry! I loved reading it, the beautiful sentences gave me life and made me feel at peace. Although, ...

Hello!! Authorian here~~ Not gonna lie, I've seen the prompt I could believe this is from. I tried to write it, something along these lines (character awareness) and failed. So ...

Hello! I hope my review is helpful~~ First off, this was so enjoyable to read. You have a wonderful writing voice that spoke to me and kept me completely engaged. ...

Hello! Authorian here for a review~ I really love this. Like, I really, really love this. The time period isn't exact, but I have a pretty good idea of what ...

Hello! Authorian here for a review~~ Okay, first off, based on your notes in the description I'm guessing you're trying to get this published? Well don't lose heart. This is ...

Hello! Authorian here for a review~~ First of all, I'm guessing this is your first work? I'm so glad you've tried your hand at writing! I hope you continue and ...

Hello! Authorian here for a review ~ My first impression of this was, definetely, freaky. It perfectly captures a creepy and blunt feel. Although, I feel like this would go ...

Fun premise, engaging narration, good description. However, there are several grammar errors, as well as parts that just felt out of place. I'll touch on those, but bear with me, ...

It serves it's purpose, a piece of life, but this feels very much like a poem. Tearing through the field of grass, She thought the world would never harm her. ...

This is simply powerful, it flows well, and isn't too long. I enjoyed the style, ten, nine, eight, etc. I have not seen it before, and it was refreshing. I ...

Aww, this is sweet. It flows really well, and I could read and understand without stopping and second guessing the meaning It's calming, and I honestly might read this in ...

Okay, first off, the technicals. You need to have paragraph breaks, no one wants to read a big block of text, it's confusing, tiring, and easy to fix. Just remember ...