Audy

Thanks for your thoughts! Glad you enjoyed it. Believe it or not, I also stilll get confused sometimes when I read poetry, so I understand the feeling! What part was ...

Seriously. This piece is one of my favs.

Bahhhh, I dont think that's true, but thank you for the kind words & thanks for reading.

Vincent, Thank you for reading & reviewing, it means a lot.

Weee, thanks for the review!

I want to sink my teeth into this review, Pretzel! Thank you for your thoughts and contributions.

Sagi, thank you so much for this review! It warmed my heart and made me happy reading it ^_^ I will totes update you! ooo, I think you're right about ...

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EnderFlash! XD I think this is cute. The rhyme forces some unorthodox turns of phrases "writing this despite inabilities" / "read it up without a waver" etc. that despite feeling ...

I think your concept and core for this poem is beautiful! More-so because of how well those two ideas fit together so well. I've had people in my life who ...

I just mean your subject. You can replace "Dean" with whoever your subject is. The "his face is a sun beam/boy of pure delight" whoever the "he" in the poem ...

Aw, p'shcyucks.

Thank you!

I adore this review, thannnk you

That's exactly what it's about. xD You're right on both the stress on emotion and the ending. Thanks for reading and reviewing!