Audy

I like this, nice flow. You've captivated the emotions and doubts well. I'm sorry that you feel depressed...sometimes writing is the best way to express those feelings and 'organize' that ...

lol! That was hilarious. I also enjoyed the Charlie bit --the gun thing was quite funny but the name bit to me is not funny at all and it gets ...

I liked this! The score years thing was a nice effect and added to the 'folktale-ness' of the story. I especially loved how just as he figured out the meaning ...

As night falls , creatures of the night stir , drawn to the underworld ' s seduction trapped by night s spell, no one escapes. Do you mean as /day/ ...

It's a bit vague, I think. Had there not been a title or anything, I wouldn't have known it was talking about suicide, which I guess is perfectly fine since ...

Yay something good to read! I really liked this! The flow of the poem was really good and it was very deep. Shadows leaping up, dancing past my addled mind. ...

I like this, it's cute! And I get it, or at least I think I do. The music kept her heart beating no? It's a really interesting idea, I do ...

I like it, it's a strong message to write about and the rhyming scheme works, I don't think it sounds forced at all. I really like the first and second ...

I agree with what's been said. Yeah the list of the seven sins, annoyed me because it didn't flow at all. I do like it though =) The beginning I ...

I liked it, it's good! I'm no poetry expert, but I think the start of every line should be capitalized? I dunno for sure. what do you need , a ...

This is cute! I really liked it, and /somehow/ the thing I liked most about it was that it was short, sweet, and didn't have much descriptions yet it's still ...

I loved it ^_^ It's really interesting and makes me want to read more. What is this /oath/ ? Hmm... well xD you did a good job, it's certainly well ...

That was really neat with the loop! And it was really well written too, I liked it a lot. =D I love reading about time traveling, it's so mind boggling, ...

Ha! I loved this, it was cute. Especially the be my paperweight part that was lovely and unexpected. For some reason when I read this, the song "I'm a Barbie ...

Scott Westerfeld is one of my favorite writers, he's excellent =) That's exactly what I was thinking! There were a bunch of things in Pretties that I disagreed with, but ...