Published November 27, 2007
what do you say?
If someone asked you
what do you believe in?
what do you say?
You say:
I believe In everything and nothing
in god & Allah, in fairies & unicorns
in Buddha & Ra
in all of this and more.
If someone says “help”
what do you say?
You say:
what, do you need a buck or two?
A place to live for a time?
I’ll always be here to lend you a hand.
When you need some time away
what do you say?
You say:
leave me alone and let me be
I need some time and space
between you and me.
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I liked it, it's good! I'm no poetry expert, but I think the start of every line should be capitalized? I dunno for sure.
I think a comma should go there...or
what , do you need a buck or two?
Otherwise it's a bit confusing =)
Also 'God' should be capitalized, no? =)