Love

My main issue with this (aside from the spelling and grammatical errors, which Audy has already gone over) is the fact that it is wearyingly cliche. It could come from any of a thousand poems already in existence, and as such, it has very little depth and evokes only a marginal interest from the reader.

Don't go straight for the first images that come to mind as you write. Instead, stretch your imagination and force yourself to think outside the box. Brainstorm! Poetry is about images and sensations as well as about a particular subject/topic. Pick particular colours, sights, sounds, smells, etc. and build up a picture that is uniquely yours and that expresses what you, personally, specifically, feel. Make it personal. Make it matter. Right now, this is just a typical love poem. Anyone can talk about someone being "irresistable" - only you know what it is that especially attracts you (e.g. a particular hairstyle, facial expression, smile, etc.). Use those things. Make it REAL. Because otherwise you're not going to connect with your reader.

I would also suggest you think about the way you're constructing your poem, and make the line breaks/rhyme scheme/whatever work to reinforce what you're trying to say. At this point, it's more like a collection of sentences than a poem, you know? It's OK to let your statements run onto more than one line

Finally, and most importantly, show, don't tell. Any time someone says something like, "You are irresistable" I get bored. Sure, that may be how you feel, but because you're telling instead of showing, I get left out - the poem is all about you, you, you. What you're aiming to do is to get the reader to experience with you. In which case, telling them doesn't cut it. You have to show them. So instead of saying "x is irresistable" or whatever, build up an image. For example, use something like a rip tide or whatever to show the inexorable force with which you are attracted to this person. Be creative XD

Basically, I think you can do better.

Keep writing,
Cheers,
~bubbles

As night falls, creatures of the night stir,
drawn to the underworld's seduction
trapped by nights spell, no one escapes.

As a moth to the flame I am drawn to you.
You are irresistible to me, no matter how I try to resist.
One taste of your lips, leaves me wanting more.
The look in your eyes sears my soul.

How is it you captivate me, without even trying?
No one else makes me feel the way you do.
Why is it despite my better judgment, I can not leave?