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Firepen, Aw :D Give broccoli a chance! Great job with this piece, Firepen! ^^ The repeated "It will do me harm" line at the end of every stanza was a ...

Fleetingeternity, Overall, this poem is a work of philosophy. It acts as a general statement of an idea, and nothing more. That's not altogether a bad thing, but it has ...

Ha! Like mother, like daughter? Ooo Lily, oh that ending is just…. ! But absolutely lovely poem. I've just skimmed over a few of the reviews and I'll have to ...

Judehnd, I wonder about the story behind this poem. Someone once said that a poem was magic done on a stage, the readers are the audience, and the writer is ...

Luckystar, Great poem! I like it for all of the images portrayed, and the conciseness of the poem as well. So often, you get a lot of poems without a ...

Dawnpath1, Love the concept to this poem, I thought it was well conceived. I got the sense of a young man contemplating his place in the world, which for all ...

Psudiname, Just want to say thank you for your patience, and sorry this review took longer than usual! I really enjoyed this piece though :o Absolutely gripping and hilarious there ...

Monotone, Okay so...I apologize for my lateness, and I just want to say omg!ilovedystopianfuturisticapocolyptic stories so I'm excited to be reviewing this :3 While I love the concept for this, ...

Hey Aqua1213, This is an interesting concept to a story, a boy (or so, I'm assuming he's young) who has senses that goes beyond our own. I think it's such ...

Persy, Love the title to this, and I love the concept behind it too. There's a bit of nostalgia and a bit of a past that you don't really want ...

04piegirl2, I really liked the concept for this piece. I love how you brought all these fantasy images, coupled with the rhyme scheme, I really got this sense of fantastic ...

Shearwater, I haven't read the previous reviews so I apologize if I sound like a broken record - but I must say, this was an enjoyable, pretty quick and easy ...

Twit, Ugh, not having notifications or some kind of reminder system is killer 8D Anyway, sorry this one took so long. Overall, definitely a clean, pretty flawless piece, if you ...

Noninjaspresent, Ooh, beautiful piece and well put together, particularly the streaming images and your experiment with time. The structure here works splendidly with the piece and I definitely feel a

Ahmad, I remember seeing this at workshop :D One thing I love about this particular piece is that it's filled with images; there's this narrative style to it and a ...