Audy

Hey TranscendingIllusion! Now, I love your experiment with sounds here. So, slender seductive / balanced delicate -- these soft /e/ sounds in close proximity do provide a nice effect in ...

Hey Blackwood! It's good to meet you. I'm just going to dive straight into this review, if you don't mind. So, first impressions - I am intrigued by where this ...

Hey There Forestqueen, it's nice to meet you ^^ If you don't mind I'm just going to dive right into this. First observation: I really like what you're trying to ...

Hey Wonder! This is a cute, simple poem that I think is meant to express the desire to just be able to run away from it all -- ultimate freedom/living ...

Hey Yazi, This is a cute poem, it's got a really happy and optimistic tone, and the words sort of match that as well: precious, sky, forever, stars, love -- ...

Hey Kitty, there's a strong voice that is evident throughout this piece, and while usually I'm picky about lines and pacing and things, I did feel like you made a ...

Hey Pensword, by the way, I absolutely love your username :o Really perfect choice for yws. Now, as to your poem, first thing that struck me was the ease in ...

Hey Skorlir! There's a really nice flow and sound-effect going on throughout this poem, which makes it really interesting and engaging to read. In a poem about sleep, I expect ...

Hey Smileykid! I'm just going to dive straight into this review, I hope you don't mind ^_^ So, I like the title and the concept of this poem, I just ...

Hey Aonar, My first impression is that this runs a little long, though, I can see it as this spoken word quality to it. But there's not really much unifying ...

Hey Writergirl, I'm just going to dive straight into this, if you don't mind. I really liked this piece a lot, actually. There is this sense of serene pleasure I ...

Hey Luckypearl, This is a short poem that seems to describe a speaker who is caught in a love triangle, and all of the complex hardships that the particular situation ...

Hey Dark! I'm just going to dive straight into the review, I hope you don't mind. First and overall thoughts about this was that it was an interesting and cute ...

Hey Sound of Rain, I love your concept and subject matter in this. As a kid, I was always inspired by dragonflies, but also terribly feared them xD This is ...

Hey Skyaejin! This is a cute little rhyming poem that you have that praises the joy of a wedding date/wedding night. The rhymes make it sound a bit sing-songy though, ...