Audy

I think what gets captured here in a way that feels like a wish, a dream, a temptation is the ease of it all. Slip. One line, one slow languid ...

Lavvie, All I can say is love, there's so much to love about this poem, the piece-meal structure is fitting. The experience for me is in the savoring of each ...

Princessink! Time is always a fun premise to tackle in a poem, and I enjoyed the way this piece tackles that premise by pairing it with a rhythmic muse. It's ...

Nobunagas, Wow, this poem has a lot of emotion and vulnerability here. The tone is very telling, because there is a sense of matter-of-fact. I think this is achieved by ...

Hi ScarredSecrets! I enjoyed this first poem of yours very much! As I began reading the piece, I immediately picked up on the rhyme - I enjoyed that aspect of ...

Thisislegacy, This was such a sweet poem. It definitely feels kind-hearted, and it has a sweet and softspoken tenderness. My favorite part of the poem were the first lines actually. ...

Ooh Killeham This is a super interesting piece! Right off the bat, I was thrown kind of off my expectations when we talk about a love poem and then there's ...

Lightsong! I love the concept behind the poem, any kind of poem that dares to dive into something taboo or go dark places in order to explore it further - ...

Reading your poems feels for all the world, like being present with my tongue out for the season's first snowflake -- or like finding a meteor dashing right as I ...

Arcticus! This poem does for me what I believe it sets out to do: recalling the breezy love-letters, the would s/he, won't s/he, and ultimately for me it is about ...

Hey Radrook! Overall I think the poem is adept with general wordsmithing and playing with the language of the piece, so I enjoyed this poem from a diction point of ...

Casa, I really love the title of this one with the context of the poem itself. Whenever I think of Mayans - the images that they evoke - I think ...

Casa! So right away, I really love the caution-tape intro. Immediately, I wanted to know why the speaker feels the need to shelter his heart, and I loved how it ...

Ella, I like the concept of a butcher bearing bad news and pain itself referred to as a knife. I think the image of "pain as a knife" is not ...

I loved this. There's this brilliant turn in the poem going from body and muscles and creases, and there's barely a transition. It is a sliver flick of a lightbulb, ...