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tell me the story about how the sun loved the moon so much he died every night to let her breathe.


  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Chickenish

    Hello, Elysium! I was brought here by the title, and my undying love of chickens and how they taste so here's a short little review for a short little poem. ...

    Jun 17, 2016

  • Lyrics » Realistic, Other
    Re: reality doesn't work

    Hello, AdrianMoon! ooooh lyrics. To be honest, I don't believe I've reviewed lyrics? I might've before, but I wouldn't have remembered, I haven't reviewed in quite a long time. Now ...

    Jun 16, 2016

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: A new morning after another night...

    Hello, Justlittleoleme2! After I reviewed another poem, this poem caught my eye because of it's title, so here's a review to get it out of the Green Room. I don't ...

    Jun 16, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Disabilities, no need to compare

    Hello, Kayley101! I haven't written a review in awhile so I hope this isn't too rusty. I know, I know. You aren't supposed to put your personal opinion in a ...

    Jun 16, 2016

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy
    Re: Death's Reign: Chapter V

    Hello, AliceAfternoon! This is Moonwatcher here for a review! I already told you about the fact that I accidently read this chapter before all the rest, and somehow most of ...

    Apr 14, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Joy

    Hello, Keepwriting! This is Moonwatcher here for a review. So this is your first free verse poem! That's exciting. Free-verse poems are my favorite, and I love the fact that ...

    Apr 14, 2016

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Dreamers

    Hello, THECATLOVER12345, this is Moonwatcher. If I am correct, this is the last review I will need to get my first star. I read what acm said below, so...I'm not ...

    Apr 8, 2016

  • Poetry » Health, Spiritual
    Re: Good Enough, I suppose

    Hello, Robusto! This is Moonwatcher with a short little review. First I will say, I love this poem. I don't love many poems, I like them. But I actually loved ...

    Apr 8, 2016

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror
    Re: Tenebrous Betrayal

    Hello Sarah12! It's Moonwatcher here, and I must say this poem was nice. The plot of the poem itself however was...interesting. I don't really read rape poems. The rhyme scheme ...

    Apr 7, 2016

  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic
    Re: A Combined Hate

    Hello there, acm. This is Moonwatcher, and I'm here for my second review. Unlike the previous one, I think I can write this review a bit better. I really liked ...

    Apr 5, 2016

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Luna

    Hello, this is Moonwatcher. So, this is my first review, and I think I have a rough concept of what should be included. I won't take my advice, I'm not ...

    Apr 4, 2016


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