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Re: The Best Book Ever Read
A book that I can read over and over again, and never gets old, just like the movie. Jurassic Park, by the now dead author, Michael Crichton. There just isn't ...
Mar 12, 2010 -
Re: The Locust King - Chapter 1
Hello, I don't have much time to make an in depth review, but I shall give you a basic review none the less. :P “I love you too,” Jane said ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: The Last Cry Of Crime (Prologue)
Now, I didn't have as many problems with this piece as your previous reviewers. For the most part everybody has chopped down your short piece and stretched it into enormous ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Ther Series of Unfortunate Events
HA! The ending. :lol: Nice little series. But.. is Lemony Snicket serious? Is he really in hiding? And for what? I've never gotten around to Googleing him. :P
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: My Thesis on Atheism and The Creation of God
Part 9. A Thought on the Bible I personally believe the bible is something sinister. Any half wit can write a book, and a bunch of men in an organization ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: Infected
Hello, I am AspiringAuthorA..M. and shall be your reviewer tonight. Hm, that is a curiously short piece. :P Prologue In 2015 a cure for the common cold was found. Yes, ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: deleted
Hello again napalm. :P Then even all this grew dim. He felt as if his eyes were closed. He felt as if he was in a body again. A real ...
Feb 28, 2010 -
Re: Heavensent: Jacob
Hello Stori, I shall be your reviewer for tonight and tomorrow. :) Jacob stained his ears. Where had that lonely sound come from? You meant 'strained' :P And just how ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: deleted
"You too, may the Master watch over you," said Jesús, missing word? opened the door and scrambled onto the dirt road. The truck roared to life, and slowly turned to ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Chaos Theory: The Zombie Effect-- Chapter 1
I'm a sucker for anything zombie related. :P *Will review tomorrow when I am fully conscious* :smt015
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Nature of Man: Gluttony
Hello Fox, I shall be your reviewer today. :P They sat down facing each other on the living room. It has had This paragraph is told in past tense, so ...
Feb 26, 2010 -
Re: Icefire - part 1
Wow, you have quite a wonderful beginning here! :P The general bowed and hurried away, leaving the queen standing alone on the cliffside overlooking the battlefield. A slow smile crept ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: The Anarchy Part 3
Here I am as promised. :P These paragraphs are all monstrously huge. :roll: Rina pulled the dead man’s body away from the burning building. Pennet jogged up to meet her. ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: Metal Gear Solid 5: Revenge of the Patriots (Prologue)
I was about to read this, but I suddenly realized that I did not want anything to be spoiled for me. I still haven't played Metal Gear Solid 4! Should ...
Feb 23, 2010 -
Re: something I just wrote
Hello, I am AspiringAuthorA..M. and shall be your reviewer tonight. "Well , well , well," The biggest of them said starting his way toward Sarah, OK, this space really had ...
Feb 23, 2010
