AsherIsAnon

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Hello, here for a short review! I like the repetition throughout this poem, including in the beginning and the end because it kind of gives of that big feel that ...

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Hey there Aaraju, Myjaspercat here to review your poem. Line-by-Line/Nit-Pick Everyday I see him So happy, so innocent he seems I would change the second 'so' here if I were ...

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I thought I might note first that it's beneficial to have the name of the novel attached to this instead of the title just being "Prologue". For example, this could ...

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Overall, I think you’ve got a really strong beginning here, and it sounds like your story’s going to be really interesting. My main critique would be that you need to ...

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Hello!! Whoooooa I like this. It took me a second to realize Sammy is dead/a ghost. At first I thought she was a girl this narrator knows at college and ...

i don't know why but as i read this i felt like word by word it gets darker and more psychotic maybe its just my own interpretation but i really ...

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This is Asher here with a review for you!! This piece was AMAZING! I was captivated by the title and I thought to peep in it... And I liked the ...

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This is Asher here with a review for you!! This piece was AMAZING! I was captivated by the title and I thought to peep in it... And I liked the ...

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This is Asher here with a review for you!! This piece was AMAZING! I was captivated by the title and I thought to peep in it... And I liked the ...

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This is Asher here with a review for you!! This piece was AMAZING! I was captivated by the title and I thought to peep in it... And I liked the ...

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Hey there AsherisAnon! Thanks for sharing your work on YWS! Like PearlC10, I agree that it is a bit awkward to switch from talking Abe to talking to him. Another ...

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Hey there AsherisAnon! Thanks for sharing your work on YWS! Like PearlC10, I agree that it is a bit awkward to switch from talking Abe to talking to him. Another ...

Beautiful and tragically sad, pulls at my heartstrings for sure and makes me think of certain people. The emotion is tender and I can just see it like a scene ...

This was so good! I don't think I can help you out by writing a review because I can't find anything to give some constructive criticism on and because I'm ...

You are talented this is great all i can say is that this makes me appreciate the troops more and helps me understand what they leave behind and when they ...