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Wow, can't believe I missed this one. You know I always blather like a moron when I read your poetry, Jack; why break our long-held tradition? :P I loved "intimate ...

I'll be the third to compliment you on the no-name thing. It always seems to either distract or confuse me when people include character names in very short pieces; it ...

Woo hoo! Resurgence of the awesome poem! I bow in much impressed-ness at your mad skills of iambic pentameter. I had to write a poem last year for one of ...

I have to agree with rosethorn here, Sam. I know you, so I know that whoever this was written for, it was meant with as much sincerity as a person ...

Ooooh... cool! I think Sam covered my main things. Mostly the only reason I was confused on the first read-through was because I read it too fast, but other than ...

Neat poem. :) My poetry critiques aren't worth beans, but here are my thoughts anyway: A certain intensity and harshness circle your consonants, as they drip off your tongue like ...

I found this from the link in Crysi's blog, so I really have no desire to criticize anything about it. It was pretty. I think we all like the thought ...

I can't decide whether I want to laugh or give your poor character a hug! But either way, this is some very nice writing, Lyndsey dear. :D I felt that ...

Yay! Jack did contemporary fiction! I have to say that I am most definitely intrigued, and very excited that you posted this. I did notice a few things I thought ...

I feel so sad Because I did not learn these words I feel so ashamed Because I did not learn these words I feel so sorry I should have learned ...

Oooh, Snoink, it's pretty and sparkly!!! This seemed very different from your normal writing style, but maybe I'm just used to FREAK's bluntness. There was a lot more pretty, flowy ...

*dies* NOOOOO! I CAN'T SAY 'UM' IN THE STORY! Reason: my dad never lets me say 'um.' He smacks me if I do. Or pinches my leg. Or tickles my ...

I love how Snoink nit-picks even when the piece is dedicated to her. :P Those are pretty nifty. Usually I'm the one in the family who writes stuff about other ...

Interesting; certainly well-written. I'm not a big fan of fantasy, however, so it takes one heck of a fantasy story to impress me. High fantasy (I think that's the right ...

Woo hoo! I'm in the story now! *dances* And Dusky... you naughty naughty little thing... you terrible tease... you forward flitting little flirt! I LOVE IT! :mrgreen: