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Wow, that was pretty cool. I am easily annoyed by poorly done accents in literature, and especially cockney, but I didn't get at all annoyed by the accents in this ...

YES! YOU WROTE! Eeee, I'm excited. :D I think my biggest gripe with this is what Sam said: lack of tension. This should be really, really exciting! And while the ...

Awww, 'Melia... It's sad! But good! And sad! And good! Good sad. I think I like Version 1 better than Version 2. It flows better, and conveys more feeling, at ...

Hmm, interesting. I'm not a huge fan of the poem overall, but there are a couple of lines that I like. Some of it read awkwardly to me, but I ...

*babbles* *runs around in circles* SAMBO! *tacklehugs* OMG, seriously. I can't even critique this. Thankfully others have gotten to it for me, because I think you sucked every little bit ...

Very cute story, Azila! Nice to see you're putting in some good competition for Cal's contest. :D Some thoughts/suggestions: Tiny snowflakes lilted toward the icy ground, covering the lawn with ...

Oh WOW, Colly. I am rarely able to deliver a decent critique on a poem (really not my thing), but I am still able to appreciate a lovely poem when ...

I want to read more of his books too, Suz. :) I really liked Atonement (both the movie and the book). For me the tragedy of the story lessened the ...

Hi Trigger! I went ahead and put an R rating on this, just to play it safe. I'd have to double-check to see if it'd be okay as a PG-13, ...

I'm confused too. At first I thought this was going to be one of those stories where it starts in the present day and the characters are hurled back into ...

Yes, I'm definitely confused. The line breaks come at very strange times, and your capitalization and punctation are irregular and ill-fitting. I don't really know what you're trying to say ...

Hi Kim! As the second of four girls, I have to say: Awww! As a mean, evil critiquer, I have to say: EDIT! Some of the things you put in ...

Hey Darren, I'm guessing by this point the assignment is long over, but I just wanted to drop in and offer some advice. There is absolutely nothing wrong with the ...

I agree with Suzanne. It's nice, and would certainly be appreciated by whomever you decide to give it to, if you do at all. But as a stand-alone piece of ...

Hey, Flemzo! Not bad work overall, but it's not particularly outstanding. There's a difference between short and sweet and underdeveloped, and I'm really leaning towards the latter right now. Tell ...