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Ooh yeah pretty good. ???????????????????????? Excuse me, I'm a bit weird :P

OMG IT'S A CLIFFHANGER! RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!

This is great. Haven't written since the secodn grade, eh? Who was your teacher? JK Rowling? This is awesome! Keep it up!

Hi Twinseed :) Thanks for reviewing. I am actually an Agnostic, therefore I am in the middle, therefore I am not an atheist. This poem was intended to be really ...

Whoa this is really good. Let's hope I see some more great things from the contest!

Thank you for your very honest comments. I wrote this pretty much as a contest entry. It is for the Creative Anything contest, where I can make it as realistic ...

This is really funny, but also really sad in places :( I loved it. You rock!

Hmm. I'm not sure if this fits in the General Fiction section. Don't get me wrong- it's good. But I feel it more of a self reflective sort of thing ...

Oh yes I love Henry Rollins. He is so honest, isn't he? I love his work.

I'm British actually, but easily mistaken.

*15 minute applause which never stops because of the awesomeness of this chapter.*

I already have her hayley10019. I wrote this two years ago.

Thank you for the honest post Calligraphy. Obviously this won't appeal to everyone, but I do notice you are write: this guy rambles. And his doesn't shut the hell up. ...

Writer's block? I never would have guessed. This is very creative- chapter 2 is gonna be great I can feel it. It is an interesting concept, although the opening 12 ...

*crickets chirping*