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  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Cruel Disposition

    Heyo! :) This is your fiancée, here to review this work- the first work of three works you posted yesterday. Now this work is similar to other poems you have ...

    Mar 28, 2014
  • Other » Culture, Dramatic Re: Sip It Up

    Soooo this is the third work detailing sexual activities. I likey; I really likey; in fact I lovey :D Not really because of the subject matter (though it plays a ...

    Mar 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Culture, Dramatic Re: The Mistress

    Heyo! :D 567ajt is here again, and here we have another saucy work. Unlike the previous work, which is animalistic and passionate, this work likens to some form of sadism/domination, ...

    Mar 26, 2014
  • Other » Other, Narrative Re: Cuntry House

    Heyo :) This is I, 567ajt, and I am here to review your very very very raunchy work. ;) It is very...well, shall we titillating? XD Hang on- bad choice ...

    Mar 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Humor Re: I Murdered My Wife; Oh F@ck

    I am not entirely sure as to why this hasn't got any reviews yet- I imagine it's because of the clogging up of spam works. Nonetheless, here is a belated ...

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: The Lust of Darkness

    Hello. This is 567ajt, here to review your poem. Now, you have proclaimed that this is an "emo" poem. I find that this self-attribution of the term makes this poem ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Other Re: Gone For Infinity

    Hello once again! This is 567ajt, here to review this smashing poem. :) As with your other works, most notably Sin Again, a dark tone is being invoked. It is ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Lady Emerald

    Hola! 567ajt has arrived, and in front of his eyes is a poem. A poem about a lady in reflection. I imagine this is symbolic of your character's rebirth, with ...

    Mar 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Sin Again

    Ahoy! 567ajt here, and I have decided to review this wonderful work of yours'. First of all, welcome back to YWS :) I am really liking the modification of your ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Art » Realistic, Humor Re: The One Eyed Enigma - Mitchell's World View Continued

    Yo! This is 567ajt, and I have arrived to talk about this work, about someone I know a lot about ;P Mitchell is renowned for his controversial and confrontational style, ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Script » General, General Re: artless symphonies

    Guten Tag. This is 567ajt, here to review this poem. Now, prior to reading this, I have read your other works, and I liked them a lot. In particular, Happy ...

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Debt

    Hola! I am 567ajt, and I have arrived to review this short poem. When you said "short", you meant it. XD This isn't a bad thing, and you manage to ...

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Other » Culture, Realistic Re: It's all So... Depressing

    First things first: I admire your bravery, not only in confronting others but confronting others regarding a controversial topic. This topic at hand is depression, more specifically self-harming and s

    Mar 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: 'Pop' goes the pill bottle.

    I bet you're a hit at parties. :D All joking aside, this work is really dark and has a very ironic/childish twang to it, creating an irony around the concept ...

    Mar 4, 2014
  • Other » Review, General Re: The Bear and The Sh!tHead Review

    Good evening, Mrs. 567 :) This is I, here to review your review of a play which in itself is a review of a society in need of reviewing. XD ...

    Mar 3, 2014


When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio