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Re: Cruel Disposition
Heyo! :) This is your fiancée, here to review this work- the first work of three works you posted yesterday. Now this work is similar to other poems you have ...
Mar 28, 2014 -
Re: Sip It Up
Soooo this is the third work detailing sexual activities. I likey; I really likey; in fact I lovey :D Not really because of the subject matter (though it plays a ...
Mar 27, 2014 -
Re: The Mistress
Heyo! :D 567ajt is here again, and here we have another saucy work. Unlike the previous work, which is animalistic and passionate, this work likens to some form of sadism/domination, ...
Mar 26, 2014 -
Re: Cuntry House
Heyo :) This is I, 567ajt, and I am here to review your very very very raunchy work. ;) It is very...well, shall we titillating? XD Hang on- bad choice ...
Mar 26, 2014 -
Re: I Murdered My Wife; Oh F@ck
I am not entirely sure as to why this hasn't got any reviews yet- I imagine it's because of the clogging up of spam works. Nonetheless, here is a belated ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: The Lust of Darkness
Hello. This is 567ajt, here to review your poem. Now, you have proclaimed that this is an "emo" poem. I find that this self-attribution of the term makes this poem ...
Mar 14, 2014 -
Re: Gone For Infinity
Hello once again! This is 567ajt, here to review this smashing poem. :) As with your other works, most notably Sin Again, a dark tone is being invoked. It is ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Lady Emerald
Hola! 567ajt has arrived, and in front of his eyes is a poem. A poem about a lady in reflection. I imagine this is symbolic of your character's rebirth, with ...
Mar 12, 2014 -
Re: Sin Again
Ahoy! 567ajt here, and I have decided to review this wonderful work of yours'. First of all, welcome back to YWS :) I am really liking the modification of your ...
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: The One Eyed Enigma - Mitchell's World View Continued
Yo! This is 567ajt, and I have arrived to talk about this work, about someone I know a lot about ;P Mitchell is renowned for his controversial and confrontational style, ...
Mar 11, 2014 -
Re: artless symphonies
Guten Tag. This is 567ajt, here to review this poem. Now, prior to reading this, I have read your other works, and I liked them a lot. In particular, Happy ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: Debt
Hola! I am 567ajt, and I have arrived to review this short poem. When you said "short", you meant it. XD This isn't a bad thing, and you manage to ...
Mar 7, 2014 -
Re: It's all So... Depressing
First things first: I admire your bravery, not only in confronting others but confronting others regarding a controversial topic. This topic at hand is depression, more specifically self-harming and s
Mar 5, 2014 -
Re: 'Pop' goes the pill bottle.
I bet you're a hit at parties. :D All joking aside, this work is really dark and has a very ironic/childish twang to it, creating an irony around the concept ...
Mar 4, 2014 -
Re: The Bear and The Sh!tHead Review
Good evening, Mrs. 567 :) This is I, here to review your review of a play which in itself is a review of a society in need of reviewing. XD ...
Mar 3, 2014
