Ardor

Hi there Persy! 567ajt for your review. I've read a lot of your work, and you may not know this but I am a big fan of your work. I ...

Hi there :) 567ajt here for your review. I came across this because I liked the simplicity of your title. I've noticed that a lot of your poems have one ...

I find this poem a bit average. I mean, that's only compared to your others. But still I think some improvements need to be made. Like, for example, in your ...

Hi there :) I am here to review your piece. I am 567ajt. I see you are new to YWS, so may I bid you welcome. Simplicity is shown through ...

Hi there :) I am 567ajt, lord and master of the most bipolar material conceived. Welcome to YWS, by the way. I found your piece humorous at the start, but ...

This is great, Sarebear. I really liked the bluntness. You have pulled it off really well.

Ah, agnostic eh? I was convinced for a long time I was agnostic, and still kind of am, but I am leaning more towards nihilism. I think your exact same ...

Hmm. Quite...short isn't it? Not bad, just a little bit empty. I feel it could have a lot more. I find that if you elaborated a bit more, or perhaps ...

I found this very nice to read. It had a nice flow, very much like water flowing through a valley. I really like how it looks like on paper, with ...

GASP! I love this! It has such a nice voice to it and- well to me- dark humour. I can't explain why, but I just laughed when he drowned. I ...

I'm not so big on environmental poems. But I'll give it my shot. Overall I thought it was really good. You showed affection and warmth towards the planet, and I ...

Ok JCK. As requested I am here. First off this is insanely short. And sometimes it can be a good thing or a bad thing. Right now....I dunno. I don't, ...

I hate to be honest with you...but this is the first poem of yours I have read. I know, you were expecting me to be negative right? Well, no reason ...

Right. This is great. Just going to put that out there first, in case you are wondering, "does he like it?" Well yep. I do. Of course, there are a ...

This is definetely better than Twilight. It is better than any other teenage appealling werewolf/vampire thing. I am not sure if it does appeal to that market and if it ...