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ArdenJinn

They/Them! Never ask what my favorite book is. Unless you want to spend the rest of your life listening to me list books.

  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: If I Were a Man

    FeatheryClouds, I absolutely loved this. This made me cry. And I don't cry easily. Now, the review. You wake up. Somethingβ€”no, everything feels wrong. It's too early for this. You ...

    Aug 19
  • Poetry » General, General Re: blue hour

    You managed to take the experience of insomnia and put it into words. Something I've been trying to do for so long. The details and imagery is amazing. the blue ...

    Aug 5
  • Short Story » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Ocean Girl

    Stunning. That's what this is. Absolutely stunning. The imagery just took me away. She can feel herself becoming one with this tiny tropical ocean she has created for herself. Her ...

    Jul 23
  • Poetry » General, General Re: seeing ghosts everywhere

    Hey! I read this and I immediately thought of not being fully conscious or in control of your own body. This narrator is afraid of making a mess somewhere and ...

    Jul 21
  • Poetry » Literature, Realistic Re: π˜½π™€π™§π™§π™€π™¬π™šπ™™ π™‡π™žπ™›π™š

    A borrowed life. I really like that. now 'cause I know that disapproving the imperfect, was another wrong... Trust me 'cause I lived a borrowed life, pretending perfection, Pretending perfection. ...

    Jul 21
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Girls

    I enjoy feminine clothing Sure, that much is true But I swear to god If I had the choice, Take away my boobs. This hit home for me. People refuse ...

    Jul 21
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Roses

    Okay. Well. I don't think I can compare to those reviews I can see below. This one is short and sweet. Especially since I need to go watch my many ...

    Jul 12
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Promise

    He said. He promised. Immediately hooks you and you want to keep reading. You weave explanations into the present moment and they don't stop the action. One thing. There's almost ...

    Jul 12
  • Art » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: ?Angel? Two separate poems that go together i want advice on. are they any good?

    I love these. I really relate and I love the imagery it creates. Cracking eggs, broken wings, cloudy skies, and a beauty we can't quite see. I love how it ...

    Jul 12
  • Art » General, General Re: Copic Marker Drawings

    Love to see a fellow artist! My only things are... I'd give the strings on the balloons a clear attachment point. Like a bow. I love the attention to shading ...

    Jul 12


A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.
— Roald Dahl